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A short of shit. Give me some feedback, any would be great.
If you enjoyed this, please check out my youtube channel.
https://www.youtube.com/user/DeadfishGames

Judging by the comments and ratings, I take it you all understand my cartoon.

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Waste of my time...


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The animation at the end is decent, have a better, or my dynamic angle of him if I'm going to be staring at him for 40 seconds (He seems kind of flat to me, if you get what I mean). The art wasn't to bad, work on your coloring, poses, and things like that. I think you're joke had potential but only if there were more little or subtle things that would happen to give the joke a little more substance. Use a different palette and make your own background to give it a better feel and stuff. This is just suggestions and my thoughts, and I'm being a little hard on this since it got on to the front page


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originalhobodeadfish responds:

I understand, this is kind of one of many test runs. I'm still getting my bearings on Flash so every little bit of practice helps.


Here is my favourite. It's perfect nothing can top this.


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originalhobodeadfish responds:

Hahaha, thanks!


Promise is limited



SUPER HEMOROIDS!!!!


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16,733
Faves:
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Votes
771
Score
1.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 15, 2014
5:51 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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