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Jan 3, 2014 | 9:11 PM EST

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You go in to a notebook and have to get out!

Authors note: Happy 2014! Here is my first 2014 game! Hope nyou enjoy it!



Rated 2 / 5 stars

As much as I hate to agree with the guy below me (who I'm sure doesn't know how young you are and who claims he likes making games, yet he hasn't posted any), he does have a point. I know Stencyl is capable of making great games, but you seem to be recycling things you've used in your previous games and no offense, this one is bland (a guy trying to get home was the plot of another of your games). I hoped that each new game you released, I would at least see something cool and new (like a rotating hotdog in the background). Perhaps you should start experimenting with other game making programs like Unity3D or Game Maker Studio (they are both free to download). You can also get some free sound effects for your games off of freesound dot org. You could also ask your family for help. Maybe they could assist (there are definitely a lot of tutorials on making games online available). I really do hope to see more games from you. Just try and improve with each one, no matter how small.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

This Game Is Easy And Awepic Awsome + Epic = Awpic Make Part 2 Plz 5 Stars

sebastian4ester responds:



Rated 1 / 5 stars

Four points
* Fun
* Unpolished
* Looks like a third grader drew it
* Every side is a death zone


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

A good platform game BUT the controls are rather stiff.

sebastian4ester responds:



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I think the game is supposed to look like this but still it could be a little better. When you jump and touch the top screen you die that could be fixed, and I don't know about anyone else but comparing to how big the character is he jump about 13 feet with every jump which is a little annoying when trying to go short distances. Also it could help if the character could go a little slower because while his in the air (jumping) I have to move him back and forth so he lands (from jumping too high) on the right spot but then hes too fast and i either, one fall to my death or to i jump again touch the top and die. I know that this is probably one of your first games but just keep trying, it could be a little better and I know for a fact that I cant even make a game so I cant say it is a terrible game, one because its not a terrible game (it just needs work) and two because I can't even make one, but instead the game needs a little touch up.

sebastian4ester responds:

I can't fix the roof glitch, sorry.