This is just an advertisement is disguise of a humor session.
Tiki Hermie is tired of just sitting around in Hawaii. He wants to do more, like blog! But Tiki Fred thinks he has dry rot and needs to smell the coconuts. See what they have to say to each other.
This is just an advertisement is disguise of a humor session.
Alrighty, here is my review of this little animation. In my opinion it could have been done with some better recording equipment or have had a different approach taken to the voice-acting as it is consistently difficult to hear what is being said as it always sounds muffled. While for the most part the words are understood they can still be kind of straining to hear. Other than that, I can't tell if maybe I just couldn't hear it, but it doesn't seem like your title or the description really matches the conversation that is happening. They mention blogs a bit and other types of social media but nothing is really done with it. (presumably, as I said it was difficult to hear) Next, the static background and lack of movement or animation other than their mouths also leads this piece to be a little duller than it could be. Now I realize it can be difficult to produce flash works, but I just feel like not enough effort was truly put into this. However, if you go back and fix up the voices a little that would already be a major improvement, and making the tikis a little more animated wouldn't hurt either. With that said, I do applaud your attempt at trying to make something new and possibly funny, but as it is now, it just seems incomplete.