LOL

HAHAHAHAHAHA

Please

Someone stab my eyes out with a rusty spork... I take back everything I said about that other one with Jared doing Kama Sutra on a Subway Sandwich.. Oh god, please deliver me

Consider it constuctive criticism.

I'll give you a little slack, because you asked.

The graphics need work, the sound does too, and the story needs a freshen up.

YOU SUCK

Dude like okay its your first movie but hell spend some more time on it , the story is okay, practise some more, dont bother putting this crap on the internet

ff in het nederlands, stomme hond je kan dr geen reet van:)

hmm

The story isn't bad, but the drawings/animation could use some work. It's okay for your 1st submission. Keep flashing.