I like this ! It has a DBZ feel to it but SO ORIGINAL :P I agree with the others on the speech bubbles and the audio of the boy that ended up with the talasmen was a but muffled but other then that GREAT
Clearly Toriyama inspired design and story- I hope it stays original as it continues. My only gripe is that if you are doing the Comic/Manga thing, don't have the speech bubbles and sound effects there before the text- it telegraphs things and takes away from the the acting- IMO at least...
Looking forward to the next one
Thanks! This first issue was done a while back, so the word balloons were not on a separate layer. Starting with the second issue, the word balloons and sound effects will be appearing as separate layers.
This was pretty good. It's something original on Newgrounds that isn't a blatant parody of style steal from other popular artists. The story so far is pretty anime cliche, and it reeks of DBZ, but meh, who cares. It's what you want to write and do so more power to you for doing something you enjoy. It's worth sticking around to see where the story goes. Good voice acting for the most part so far as well. Good job for starting something that's going to be involved.
OMG YES JUST THIS YES. Best shit ive ever seen. Ever.
I am sorry for the late mayhem. I just don't want to be called a sugar-coating.
I will try to give CC next time, but I often get the feeling I am not taken srsly enough.
Who I am to decide however how many stars you should get. What am I? A Lead-Pschiatrist?