Vague, confusing, disjointed, bad usage of sound effects and really odd voice over-dubbing.
The artwork isn't too horrible.
If you want to improve this, draw out a rough storyboard for the story before animating it.
That way you can get your conceptual idea turned into something that makes a bit of sense before going to the trouble of animating it entirely. The art shows some promise for future improvement, but I'd practice on animating just one character doing some action moves to get the skills of body animation & timing down before going into a full cartoon animation.