The song killed it.
Maybe without the really bad song it could manage to be kinda funny .
And about the animation, really good work, not outstandog but nice, if this is one of your first animations i think that later, with some practice and expierence, you will get better.
This song is really dope, animation is poor, idea is kinda interesting, I usually hate pony shit. Watch the tags, change if possible.
Damn, I put a lot of work into the animation. Guess I just have to try harder!