A parody video that shows a video game character dying graphic violence style, IT SUCKS!

Nice video!
You should try to add in some more little details in the background to make it seem more realistic. Also, I agree with artistunknown, the voice acting could be better. Maybe if you had more than one person voicing characters.

It's great to see another Pikmin animation on newgrounds, there really needs to be more of them. While this wasn't the best representation of Pikmin, or the best animated thing, I did enjoy it.

The writing was interesting, clearly being a retelling of Olimar landing on the planet and then needing the Pikmin to aid him to get off, but this time he's unsuccessful, and there were some dark elements mixed in, like Olimar being a somewhat tyrannical asshole and the Pikmin not liking him. A decent adaptation of the "bad" outcome of PIkmin, you even put in the fireworks that happen when Olimar goes in the onion, heh. The actual writing was okay, it could have been a lot better, but for a more adult spin on Pikmin, it's pretty good. The humor felt a bit lacking though. Some moments were chuckle-worthy, but really there wasn't anything else beyond that. Also, I really felt like something more needed to be added to the end. It felt very abrupt just ending after the fireworks. Work on your comedic timing and pacing of action and you can get a lot better.

The art in this felt fitting, though something about it is a bit unappealing to me, probably the thick outlines. The backgrounds had some detail, and there was some nice use of color; it represented the Pikmin planet nicely. The animation was all over the place though. The very first bit of animation in this, with Olimar getting out of the ship, seemed really poorly done and made me think the rest of this was going to be just as bad, but to my surprise, the animation in the rest of it was a lot better, though not anything too spectacular. I felt it could have used more frame by frame animation, characters seemed a bit stiff at times, the lip-synch was pretty good at most points though.

The voice acting was pretty good. There didn't seem to be anything wrong with the mic quality, and the voices were pretty well done and seemed fitting. Really not much to talk about here, though the voices could have used a bit more variety, they all sounded a bit similar.

Overall, this was a pretty good representation of Pikmin, and was a decent short that I did enjoy a bit. Comedic timing, animation, and voice variety could use some work, but this was pretty enjoyable and pretty decently done. With time, you'll get better. I look forward to your future submissions.

I LIKE LARD...

this is pretty good, but the ending couldve used more, like credits or a better outro.