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Madness Sniping 1

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rated 1.95 / 5 stars
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Action
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madness
sniping
2013

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Uploaded
Nov 22, 2013 | 7:41 PM EST

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Author Comments

Blaze are The Sniper Man... , he contrated by Jake for kill Jonh ...

Reviews


nuke505nuke505

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Could definitely use a lot of work, but your on the right track. keep animating and you will improve. it can only get better from here.



DabLifeDabLife

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad. I always enjoy a Madness animation. The sniper (Blaze) reminded me of Agent 47 from the Hit-man game series; it's always cool to have an animation relate to something you actually like. The music was pretty neat to!

It was a good flash, but there are a few improvements that you could work on. First off, you should have a play/replay button. It really makes it easier, and less of a pain to just have the animation loop over and over. Plus, the animation was alright, but a little choppy. Maybe a higher fps could work. Plus if you could get rid off the white border, that would make the movie so much more enjoyable.

Above all though good job man, and keep it up! I'm sure your next one will be great.

3/5

~BM~


XiRoNYeLLoWX7500 responds:

iam working in play and the replay button


spacegod105spacegod105

Rated 4 / 5 stars

NOT BAD



matdigmatdig

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

There's a lot of technical things you need to work out with this animation. Your background doesn't cover your entire stage in some parts and it leaves these glaring white stripes. Also, you do not need the dialogue; this story can be told by action alone. In addition, your choice of font is difficult to read and the yellow text at the end clashes really badly against your background. That being said, it looks like you animated this frame by frame. I applaud you for that because that is not, at all, easy to do. Consider a replay button. If you need help with the code, PM me and I can help you.


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XiRoNYeLLoWX7500 responds:

I'm working on it


wolfkillerzombiewolfkillerzombie

Rated 5 / 5 stars

cool song and vid