Not bad. I always enjoy a Madness animation. The sniper (Blaze) reminded me of Agent 47 from the Hit-man game series; it's always cool to have an animation relate to something you actually like. The music was pretty neat to!

It was a good flash, but there are a few improvements that you could work on. First off, you should have a play/replay button. It really makes it easier, and less of a pain to just have the animation loop over and over. Plus, the animation was alright, but a little choppy. Maybe a higher fps could work. Plus if you could get rid off the white border, that would make the movie so much more enjoyable.

Above all though good job man, and keep it up! I'm sure your next one will be great.

3/5

~BM~

NOT BAD

There's a lot of technical things you need to work out with this animation. Your background doesn't cover your entire stage in some parts and it leaves these glaring white stripes. Also, you do not need the dialogue; this story can be told by action alone. In addition, your choice of font is difficult to read and the yellow text at the end clashes really badly against your background. That being said, it looks like you animated this frame by frame. I applaud you for that because that is not, at all, easy to do. Consider a replay button. If you need help with the code, PM me and I can help you.

cool song and vid

Fairly good animation.

Constructive criticism:
I feel that the movie needs a replay button or something, because once it plays twice, the music overlaps. A way to fix this, is in flash, set the sound to 'stream' and on the layer the music is on, if it is on stream, the music will stop at the frame it ends at, instead of play endlessly.

I think also that some sounds could be made quieter, specifically footsteps.

Some text displayed onscreen, such as when the guy hands the other guy the package, plays too quickly, and it can be missed.

This is all constructive, and not intended to dis-encourage you, but help improve your future animations.

Your actual animation is done well I think, but at times it can be a little slow. I do like how you went frame by frame for almost everything though. it made everything look a lot more natural.

One last thing, is that maybe in the future you should start designing your own characters. (I remember when I started out I used to use madness combat characters too) it just helps you establish an individual identity on this website.

Keep the animations coming, I look forward to see what you can do in the future :)