Its okay I like it
Author Comments
This is my first animation series so I hope you like it and tell me what I could do to improve.
PS. Sorry it's so short, I'll try to make it longer next time.
Robojake360 responds:
Thanks
Neat animation! I would recommend a longer shot of the group at the beginning, just so the viewer gets a better understanding of what's going on. Now that I've rewatched it so many times I can't come up with anything else to add. Sounds would obviously be nice, but for your first piece of work its great. Keep it up!
Robojake360 responds:
That's awesome you say that because I've been meaning to get a sound manager of some kind and i'll try to get the men from the beginning to play a bigger role in parts 2 and 3.
Needs a pre-loader.
Sounds are a must.
Some kind of story.
And must be longer.
Apart from that, seems ok, and drawing and animation seem basic but fine, background may need some more detail though.
Robojake360 responds:
Thanks, I really appreciate that.
and I can't really make a better animation style because this is my first real animation.