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Your parents have been taken and your left alone.

You have to travel around the worlds avoiding soldiers to reach your parents to live a better life.

This was a school assessment that I had to upload to the web to pass.


The game screen should fit better on the screen. It is raised up, and leaves a blank area on the bottom. The graphics should better, and correct the spelling and grammar errors.

Very nice graphics, animations and so on. I really loved it. But sadly there is not much more to it. For school assessment... really good, but as a normal game... well it's hard to call it a game really. I see potential.

a nice and little game to play during a lunch break. really really short through but still it's fun i would suggest making the guards not have a set path if they see you. other wise it's nice and fun.

paulw86 responds:

thanks alot, yeah, im currently working on the AI at the moment. for this course we didn't get taught how to control the enemie so i resorted to doing animations of them on a set path.
ive got something working at the moment but it still needs improvement.

Thanks for your input

Flaws right at the beginning... intro is really long. Several misspellings, grammar mistakes. Art isn't anything special. The music is annoying too. The player size is annoying as well. It won't fit my whole screen, which is something you should really fix in my opinion.
For gameplay, i think you should be able to regen your "health" bar. The mechanics is glitchy as well. You can just run past the guards and not even be deducted in health.

You can make a game like this better ^^ It's playable right now, but it can be made so much better with effort, in my opinion. 3.5/5.

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paulw86 responds:

thanks for the input, will try to work on these points. for the screen size, what would you recommend?

will work bettering my skills for the future

Nice work. A little simplistic, but well executed!

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2.49 / 5.00

Nov 13, 2013
9:04 PM EST
Adventure - RPG