Eh, this wasn't too bad. The graphics aren't fantastic, but the lyrics/singing are actually better than I was expecting. The main issue I have with this is the sound quality. The singing is really faint compared to the music and at times it's really hard to hear what's being said. Other than that it's a fair effort. Nice job.
Author Comments
This is simply a snapshot of a full Flash Cartoon Musical that Andy Manning and Ben Freeth have been creating and developing over the past year as a project for their musical theatre school. We'd like to hear you're comments or feedback regarding the cartoon, and whether or not you'd consider this a piece of 'theatre'. Let us know your thoughts or feelings by emailing freeth.ben@gmail.com
The animation is decent, song is fitting, this is a good attempt at creating a flash.
It's not bad, in fact, I like it.
However, it can be improved by more detail on the flash, such as the character and background, as well as the supporting cast heads.
Also a pre-loader bar would help so it doesn't come on unexpected, plus a ending screen to stop this from looping.