First of all, I'm not really sure why you named it "Failed Attempt", already you have put the submission down, it's like you have no faith in it and named it as such to either get sympathy votes, or other means.

The trailer isn't that bad, apart from some spelling, grammatical and punctual problems, as well as the music is not really fitting.
The premise of the game, though not making sense is decent.
Hopefully you can get some tips or collaberate with some people on here with an understanding and skills of flash that will help you get this idea into motion.