Well, it was funny and a good start :)
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My first animation, so please try to lessen the insults there is still lots of imrpovements to be done though :]
not bad!
No worries, you're most likely not gonna get insults here on Newgrounds. :)
So, the animation was actually pretty decent. Thing is, the submission has absolutely NOTHING to do with the madness series whatsoever. It would have been much more appreciated if you'd drawn your own sprites and characters. Trust me, it's also a lot more fun. :D Some more sound, or even background music would've helped too. The rest is just about practice.
One tip: any good animation, starts with a good story. If you wish to be good at this, you'll need to start by working on that.
I'm not going to judge you on your animation quality, cause this is your first and I'm sure you'll improve. But you'll find out that having a good story can get you far, even with a not so good animation.
I'm giving you 1 star, but it's not to say give up, it's to say: TRY AGAIN, keep going, get better
And be sure to catch the audience's attention
1 star because this is fun but one scene...really?