the idea is there but you need to improve a lot, art style, animation movement and BGM, but its not bad, if i was you i'd re-do this down the line and compare them and see how much you have improved.
The Computor Virus
October 31, 2013 –July 1, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
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IF YOU CAN'T HEAR ANY SOUND, SEE THE VIDEO WITH SOUND HERE:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=noAA-Fq5qpE
Sorry about that. I re-uploaded the video several times here, but I still can't hear any sound...
49 people have gone missing in the small Swedish town of Snorkråka. Something strange is going on here...
But never mind that, let's go and buy a new computer!
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jumps at 24-25 seconds
<deleted> responds:
I re-uploaded it AGAIN, and this time the sound actually worked, until the video was done processing, and then it failed again, thanks for that newgrounds...
"Computor" for your "wallet"? Poor animation, poor dialog, poor sound. Keep working at it.
It's kinda good but you need to improve your art style since it's a little choppy and btw next time you upload something try to see if there is a problem with the sound (considering that this animation lacks sound and/or BGM
<deleted> responds:
I noticed the problem with the sound, but no matter how many times I re-uploaded it, it refused to work. The exact same file works just fine on youtube, that's why I posted a link to it in the author comments.
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