The story and style of art were amazing! The animation was as well! As for the dialogue writing and voice acting, it wasn't that believable, but none the less an overall great animation.
I really believe this is one of the best stories I've seen here in New grounds, very original, with an unique style and a wonderful narrating rythm. It really pulls you in, though I think the animation can still improve, I do take into consideration the fact that it is quite long in comparison to other animations here. With a bit of training and practice this could very well be a great stand alone series. Thank you all so much for giving us users this fine story. Hope to see more of your work in the future!
As usual, the characters are expressive and interesting (though Calamity's voice threw me for a minute, since the only other animation I'd heard her in was Simple Melody).
The backgrounds, unfortunately, are a little bland, and the choice of music during the chase scene was a little jarring when the kleptomaniac started bleeding. The animation during that scene was also a little off, mainly during moments when our heroes were actually attacking the thing.
However, the story itself is interesting, and the characters are all likeable, and that gets you 4 stars.
Cool characters. The girl and pumpkin man resemble a lot to Jack and Sally.