Premise was a bit predictable. Last image was not that scary. Ehhh, kinda bollucks.
This was terrifying! Thanks.
Woo! That wasn't bad at all jumped a bit at the ending. I think your voice needs a bit of work I mean like its not bad but you need to pace yourself when you narrate especially for creepypastas. That said you did good overall
Oh how I long ghost/haunting/Halloween stories. One does not need to be gory to be frightening. While this didn't frighten, nor scare me, it did give me that 'Oh that was awesome!' You know like the good old 'claw hanging from the car door handle' story of old told on playgrounds as a kid during recess. Those are the stories that make me smile and let out a nervous laugh. Thanks for walk down nostalgia.
That was great, maybe not as shocking as it could've been, but definately creepy. If you wanted to make this a real scare, you could've made the ending more of a surprise. The eyes glowing, the hand on the shoulder, these elements all made the ending a bit predictable. Still a great Halloween flash though, have a good one!