Pretty good for your first animation with the software. My only suggestion would be that the expressions look like many I've seen in other works. I think looking up "lackidaisy expressions" and seeing the deviantart result should provide some tips.
Author Comments
Slade has a lot of waffles. But will he share them with Alksen and Malcolm?
Original audio by Julian Smith
Animation by Francesca Barrientos (Devgirl Neko)
On a side-note, this is my first animation using Flash. It took me a total of 3 days to make. Special thanks to my friends for the moral support!
Pretty good for your first movie
The animation was nice it wasnt very funny to me though
Great job, this is a good step for your first flash. I really like the voice and the joke, it seem to fit pretty well.
funny but i can see why this is under judjement.
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2.93 / 5.00
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- Comedy - Parody