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My name is 8BitBlitz! This is my ACTUAL attempt at trying Flash.(Not like last time with the joke animation)
Yes, it is VERY basic-looking, but I assure you, I will try my hardest to improve. If you can give me good constructive critism, it will help out, ALOT.
I don't want to brag or make excuses, but I had Flash CS6 for a free 30 Day Trial. I had to rush and make some mistakes here and there, and yes, they are noticable. Anyways, I hope you at least get some entertainment out of this, and like I said,
Please give me some constructive critism!
Thank you!

PS I just watched this animation.

I am in pain right now, this is seriously terrible, lol, PLEASE HELP ME IMPROVE.


It's a little weird, and some of the writing is illegible so I can't read what's going on half the time. The lack of dialogue didn't help, but a short without any sounds or any voices can work so long as your viewer has an idea what's going on. I had no idea what was happening or what the story was, but I liked it because it made me laugh a few times. I appreciate random and nonsensical humor. It's one of my favorites.

The animation fluctuates from good to indistinguishable art every now and then, so I recommend practicing consistency with your drawings. But other than that, I enjoyed it! 3/5.

8bitblitz responds:

Well, at least you got entertained off of it :3
Thanks for the constructive critism! I will try improve thanks to your comment!

I had no clue what was going on, but it entertained me. Also, your animation skills are pretty fucking good. Mine are horrible compared to yours. Look at my animation and you will see why.You can atleast draw, and you have some color in there. I don't think your that bad. Keep making more and I think you will get alot better.
Good effort.

8bitblitz responds:

Thanks man. Don't down yourself! I'm pretty sure your animation is just on par with mine!

Also, thanks for the support! It really helps!

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Credits & Info

3.31 / 5.00

Oct 5, 2013
6:59 PM EDT
Comedy - Original