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Scarf and Dark: Pilot

rated 3.31 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Oct 5, 2013 | 6:59 PM EDT

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Author Comments

My name is 8BitBlitz! This is my ACTUAL attempt at trying Flash.(Not like last time with the joke animation)
Yes, it is VERY basic-looking, but I assure you, I will try my hardest to improve. If you can give me good constructive critism, it will help out, ALOT.
I don't want to brag or make excuses, but I had Flash CS6 for a free 30 Day Trial. I had to rush and make some mistakes here and there, and yes, they are noticable. Anyways, I hope you at least get some entertainment out of this, and like I said,
Please give me some constructive critism!
Thank you!

PS I just watched this animation.

I am in pain right now, this is seriously terrible, lol, PLEASE HELP ME IMPROVE.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's a little weird, and some of the writing is illegible so I can't read what's going on half the time. The lack of dialogue didn't help, but a short without any sounds or any voices can work so long as your viewer has an idea what's going on. I had no idea what was happening or what the story was, but I liked it because it made me laugh a few times. I appreciate random and nonsensical humor. It's one of my favorites.

The animation fluctuates from good to indistinguishable art every now and then, so I recommend practicing consistency with your drawings. But other than that, I enjoyed it! 3/5.

8bitblitz responds:

Well, at least you got entertained off of it :3
Thanks for the constructive critism! I will try improve thanks to your comment!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Interesting plot of randomness. xD

8bitblitz responds:

Exactly :3