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The Asclepial Stones

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rated 3.80 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Sep 23, 2013 | 7:56 AM EDT

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My description wasn't added properly, haha. It should hve been this:

Johnny Gunn and Kyle the Boy Archer embark on a quest to find the legendary Asclepial Stones!

This is the longest I've ever worked on a cartoon! It was originally a pitch for Cartoon Hangover back in November, but then I decided to animate and release it myself. I have a lot of ideas for this series if people like it, so let me know what you think!

I absolutely love reviews and I try to respond to them all!

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CrackerJack30CrackerJack30

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

No review so far? Hm. Well, I give it a try.

Sound & music are good imo, the voice acting also, I can understand everything they say. The art is not perfect (dragon fire), but then again it's unfair to compare the work of an talented flash artist with the effort of some big animation studio, isn't it?

The only thing that's not so good in my book is the story arc. It's a bit random & confusing. Still, this idea has potential and some nice ironic moments. I would like to see Johnny Gunn act even more pathetic and heroic, Kyle could be more goony and a female character wouldn't be bad either.

So yeah, some room for improvement, but worth a watch, no doubt.


TylerLandis responds:

Thanks so much for the review!

Yea, I think in my head the scattered plot was part of what made it funny, but it doesn't seem like people agree with me on that. I guess that was just a misjudgement on my part! The next part definitely flows a little better, and there is a female character! I might end up working on another project before I revisit this show, but I hope to home back to it at some point.

Again, thanks for your input! It's helpful!

-Tyler