The game is very interesting and very horror like but it is very fun if you like scary things. I'm going to give this game 4 stars for it's fun and unique puzzles.
Not going to sleep tonight anyway so ....... great game guys. You guys should create a mini hint, because I have a lot of difficult solving things around this game ( LOL ). Hope that the Third part will be good as this one. Arigato gozaimasu ^_^
You know, on some nights, I lucid dream. And I never had to encounter those Shadow People. Maybe now I will because I know of their existence? Damn! lol I better wake up tomorrow. lol Anyway, great freakin' job. I really like how that note was written. (Found all of them) And I also like that special ending. I really hope the third game is as good or better than this one. See you in the deeper end.
Well, I enjoyed myself. Thanks for another good experience, Scriptwielder, but all the dialog was still terrible, like last time (probably more so this time because there was so much more of it). I *STRONGLY* encourage you to carefully consider the implication of every word you use in the story. Poor word choice makes an interesting narrative sound flimsy and half-baked. For example, in the note you piece together are the words, "I first encountered this phenomenon in the early 80's, but it would seem They have existed since the dawn of the human race. Commonly known as [...]"
...why would it "seem"?
who is this guy?
if these things are so "commonly known", why is the protagonist thumbing over every book in the library? Shouldn't these creatures be more esoteric? You just turned your creatures from intriguing into interchangeable by opting to give them a generic, descriptive name. Giving them a unique name will root them in the plot and not generic horror mythology.
I thought it unwise to use the word "realm" because this note sounds like it was supposed to be [somewhat] scholarly but that word is extremely archaic and just plain nerdy to use in reference to ANYTHING.
Please have a lighter touch on the script and the vignette. You're making good games, but they could be great with a little more practical consideration.
Not only was this a perfect compliment to the first one, but I do believe you have surpassed it. I cannot wait until the final depth!