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Author Comments
This is a teaser for an animation series I hope to make when I finish highschool. By then, the animation will look better, and they'll be longer than 4 mins.
I gave it a four, the animation could be better, but some talent is shining through. I can't wait for the upgraded version after you graduate
How the FUCK does this have such a low score? Either you've got someone seriously hating you, or the majority of voters are really that stupid.
The animation in this was really well done. There was lots of movement and it was really fun to watch. I would suggest using a thinner brush though because the thick outlines are a bit unappealing, but that shouldn't matter when the animation is this good.
The story was also pretty interesting, albeit a bit clche. Voice actors would have really helped this and I'm sure that's why people voted so low. There seems to be some sort of thought that not having voices makes an automatic 0... Also reading text is annoying, especially when there's a lot of action in it.
Another problem is the display. First, you got the letterboxing, which is totally unecessary, and then it doesn't even cover up the entire document, so you can see parts of the stage and the stuff that's on it. If you want it to be widescreen, then use some 16:9 stage size, the max 16:9 size of the Newgrounds player is 910 x512, so you can use that to not have to worry about anything getting messed up. If you want the letterboxing though, then make sure the black boxes actually fit the screen ;)
Seriously though, this was great and I don't understand why its score is so low. It totally deserves at least a 3.5. Good luck on your future animations. I hope to see more from you.
Ev1L0rd responds:
More of the story will be revealed in the next one, which you'll be happy to know, I've started searching for voice actors. If you know anyone that can speak english, do a range of voice types, and has their own recording equipment could you please ask them to message me here on Newgrounds. I'll keep you updated if you like, and if you yourself would like to help, please let me know by messaging me. I'll send you details from there
5 stars man!
Ev1L0rd responds:
Much abliged
Well, it looked pretty good here, so it should only improve with more practice!
The black bars that you added didn't cover the entire top and bottom of the screen: you can see white and some sprites above and below them.
Ev1L0rd responds:
I don't know what happened there. The black bands I cut to the exact size of the document, so it must have stretched when I uploaded it. Thank you though, I'll ensure it won't happen next time.