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a commission i had todo in eight days i finished before eight days

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i got right into it also hit home for me cheers



yhis is defenitly not the best ive seen, but 8 days? wow, that is a short time!


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a story of a man who liked to melest boys with hair I LOVE IT!


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Great montage man. Love your drawing style. Very heartwarming production.


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You know what. I like it.
Kinda bothered me how you could see lines from one thing through another, like for example there was a lamp, and you could see the lines from the wall go through it.
Another one is when he was walking, I could see the little lines for the grass through his teeth.

Another issue would be the beginning, those 10 seconds of pure silence as the camera got closer to the building was really unnecessary, and I truly thought I had to do something, like press a button, and that shouldn't be something I should be led to believe.
So yeah, I liked it. Maybe if it was longer and had a stronger message?


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frass70 responds:

yeah i went full on lazy with this one because i had to make it two minutes in eight days so i made the establishing shot extra long to kill time and didnt really fix the lines here and there lol

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1,655
Votes
153
Score
2.96 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 10, 2013
5:36 PM EDT
Genre
Drama
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