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Our first Game Grumps animated! Half way through being finished, I realized that I picked a really hard one to animate. I hope everyone likes it though! Please rate fairly! c:
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I like it.
Somethings that I would change would be their voices in the first part. I get what you were trying to do, but it sounded too weird, like their voices were slowed down and a bit deeper. I believe it should have sounded maybe muffled, or just more far away, but not quieter.
Animation needs a lot of work, maybe use more camera angles on different perspectives. I would also recommend making more face expressions, to give the animation more "life".
Use references when drawing, it'll help you get the proportions right.
And well, have to say it, when he started singing the little mermaid I burst out laughing XD
Man, I love Game Grumps.
Auditory: 4/5, Fairly funny (at least to me), but perhaps a bit on the overly silly side. A clever joke or two wouldn´t have hurt, although I might be missing the point.
Visual: 2/5, At present, animation is very unspectacular. While I understand that it might be difficult to animate well, only the end result matters. To be honest, this is still better than what I have done, but I do not presume myself Newgrounds worthy.
I kinda like this, but really, that's mostly due to the funny audio. There wasn't very much added to what was already there, as in it wasn't visually interesting (although I do like the colours used). It seems like you've got the right intentions, but you should choose an audio clip that has the Grumps playing out or describing a scenario, that way you can add the visuals yourself, making it more interesting for the viewer, rather than just having Arin sitting on the couch, with an occasional background change.
You're headed in the right direction though, so keep it up! :)
The audio is off during the first scene, and there is a lack of actual animation(s). It's just a song by Arin with a few drawings.
I just want to clarify something with you. The audio in the first scene is off because it's done that way on purpose. I wanted it to feel as though you were in the game and in my head their voice would come first then the movements(I understand not everyone would get that). Second, I'm guessing you haven't seen too many 'Game Grumps Animated' because most, if not all are done in this style of stop and go stop and go. Thirdly, this video is over 2 minutes long, with over 3 thousand frames... My point is, it wasn't just a few drawings but either way, I'm guessing you didn't know that drawings are technically what makes an animation. I get that not everyone would like this but you should at least know how hard we work on it, regardless if you like it or not. Maybe, you should try animating a video yourself so you can see just how much work it takes. Oh, and not to mention this was completely done in FBF(frame by frame). Thank you for watching.
Credit where credit is due, you did a good job dealing with such a random audio clip!
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