First 30 seconds set up a nice story but then it got pretty weird.
Ending was too rushed and felt out of place.
Should instead spend an extra minute to help make things more dynamic.

Not bad. Ending was really sudden and didn't really match the plot. Could have added a bit of dialogue for a clearer story.

Props man! If this is your first animation, then you will get places. I made my first (and only) animation for a school project as well and it was no where near this level. That isn't saying you don't need to improve, but that's one hell of a start.

Kind of anti-climactic. Plot could have been better.

I always wondered what a human internet hotspot would be like. Animation is a bit rough here and there but this is pretty awesome toon otherwise.