Some of my thoughts while playing this:
If this is one of your first games, good job, keep improving!
-Thinking outside of the box (walking on text, ...)
-A buildup to the end, was announced several times.
Dislikes (More like tips):
-You die way too easily, by that I mean that you only have to be in the vicinity of an object to die, make it smoother please!
-Some kind of background would make it more fun.
-Make the levels harder (as you improve) and add more threats
-And last, but not least, please, PLEASE, make the ending more pleasing...
If you would like me to review more of your games, send me a pm or something ;)
Final rating: 3
Good job for a beginning gamecreator, keep up the good work!