but... kunichua means good evening...
I want to say Hello but Marcus Wont let me!!!!
but... kunichua means good evening...
While this wasn't horrible, it was horribly unrefined!
The animation was choppy and there were spots that were left uncolored. The choppiness indicates that you're too anxious to get it done, vs taking time to do all the drawings necessary to smooth it out. The uncolored parts indicate that you don't care about the details.
The sound was so bad that I had to watch twice to figure out what was going on, and still haven't figured out what he said right before "...videos on youtube." Go to my most recent news post. Toward the bottom, there's a part about sound quality. Watch that tutorial by Ricepirate! It'll definately help you!
Lastly, your video mentions youtube. This is not youtube, but this shows that you found us and instantly wanted to submit something, without taking the community into consideration. A lot of crap comes over here from youtube, so it's not as well liked around here as it could be. Submitting this video to us is like when someone you know calls you by someone else's name. While it could be an honest mistake, it still doesn't feel good.
I see potential in you, but this is not at all a good example of it. Take pride in what you create, but create things you can take pride in. Again, go check out my news post for hopefully helpful things. :)
Lol you make a great point. i was in fact tired because i work as a sceurity guard. and i dont come home until 8 in the morning. But Thank you for the helpful comments. Yeah im kinda new to new grounds so i do need to be carful on how i post things. =_= and i need to buy better recording equipment. Like i told my friend already. sorry you had to go watch it over to understand it. i do take pried in my work lol but I'm barely starting out. your advice is really helpful and boosted my sprite. so i will do better.
Himm...
ummmmmmmm. I think this style has potential
The mouth and hands movement are a bit off with the voice and the background music nearly hinder the actors voice. I wish you luck and a little improvement can big impacts :)