Sure the animation is flawed, but the point was still a bit funny to me.
I know. I was about to add more effort into it though but its really hard for me to do it anyways.
This is a good first movie, and I'm sure it was a great learning experience for you. You should keep working at it and make more. I don't think you should have uploaded it though.
Think of it like this: If you were looking at videos on Newgrounds, would you have wanted to watch this video? Would you be glad you sat through it, rather than another video on the site? If the answer is no, try to figure out why, and then improve it for your next video.
Maybe. But to be honest, after I am done building my own computer except using my mom's computer which is 7 or 8 years old. I will try make a good animation video just for you guys to watch. :)
this was .... ok
Not bad. Good use of sound, but a little rusty on the animation. Could be put in sync better, and with a little more work, kick up the fps. But good work overall.