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Sonic Ranger 1

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Aug 14, 2013 | 2:56 PM EDT

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Knux had to fight a strange hedgehog! Finally the hedgehog destroyed him



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Avant garde.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

The animation is very rigid. One minute everyone is still, the next they're in a completely different area, it's very weird and confusing. Sorry to be a jerk about this part, even Im a victim of this because of not double checking my review and typing fast but, but your grammar and spelling/choice of words is a bit terrible.
The story is confusing and offers no back story, so it's confusing the viewer on what's going on.

Please revise this, make the animation more fluent, add a backstory that the viewer can understand, and revise your grammar/spelling/choice of words.

Zaidcristal responds:

Thanks! I will start again, but when you say: "They'rr in a completely different area"x... They teletransported... okay okay! give me a second... That happened because I'm not americN or british. I'm spanish with a very well emglish. The problem with the grammar, is that this video was made 3 years ago, :s Anyways thanks for your opinion ;) I just worked in Windows Movie Maker, and I noticed that it isn't so good.

I'll use a pro program like adobe flash cs3 or cs4.

I just need one more star! Or even i prefer that the admins delete this shit, I'll make another one. Now I learned everything I want from sprites!

PD: I'm new here so I don't know the rules very well ;)