TBH that kind of frightened me with the eyes.
This is submission #1 for you?
You're going to do just fine :)
Hey guys and gals, this is my first animation here so please be gentle with my pitty soul :D
It is a very short animation and since Iam not a very good voice actor (really not) the short voice clip I use in this clip sounds kinda awkward but it was the best I could come up with.
TBH that kind of frightened me with the eyes.
This is submission #1 for you?
You're going to do just fine :)
I like the thought of a cubicle character. I felt that the Side light bulbs flashing down on the ground was not necessary. Since this is your first, it's just a start and you'll get better. The particle effect transition from black to the next scene doesn't seem like a dream effect. The scenes were quite dull. Him waking up looks to me as a flat image. For your next work, focus on the overall.
Ill be looking forward to your next work :)
As I, Im a beginning artist wanting to work on animation
Good Luck!
Good animation, voice acting needing a little work (which you've already explained). Overall, great job!
There was much substance(too short). The animation was smooth and sound quality was decent.
Not bad for a start.
Thanks dude^^