This Pivot animation isn't terrible, but certainly not good. The framerate is really low and the movements are rushed. I can tell this is an early animation, but at least try making new stick figures rather than the default. I am a Pivot animator myself and I am at 33 fps. I recommend slowly building up to 33 fps. Also try practicing a bit more. It's good for a first one though. I have been animating in Pivot since 2009, and my first was awfull, this is not bad for a first, but not good for an animation. 2/5
~Stegosaurus