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Jul 30, 2013 | 12:09 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is actually an 'exercise' to improve a little on my animation.

I love how the mouth is, but again there are quite a lot of areas to improve. Eh, I'm still learning.

Accordions are awesome.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I must say, I'm a bit embarrassed reviewing this piece since my last review on one of your submissions was unnecessarily harsh. Not to mention, everything I critiqued on in your expressions animation can clearly be seen here. Clean, crisp and smooth animation, funnier content and it's long content too! And from what I read in the reviews, this is an experiment, like the other one. Your experiments show a lot about your craft.

I enjoyed the transition from a sweet, young woman to a deep, hungry man ordering the food. The expressions are great and the lip syncing is good too. You've definitely got a great talent for this, and I'm looking forward what you have to offer when you release a final product!

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JaceC responds:

Oh no no don't be! Your criticism is relevant! I do need to work on longer and elaborate plots!

It is reviews like these that make all the work worthwhile!

I really appreciate all of this, you just made my day.

Thank you. Very much. And have a nice day!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

This has nice animation. Looks loopy and comical. Keep these exercise animations up and you'll do just fine here on NewGrounds.

JaceC responds:

Thank you very much! Help me spread this if you can!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Everytime her voice deepened I could see it on her face mostly through the eyebrows. That was very awesome work there! I enjoyed the ridiculously long detailed food choices.
I look forward to... More slighty longer but full of dramatic facial expression themed flashes
With maybe... a contrived plot line that has been used countless time through the ages
resulting in... A cliched or M night shyamalanish ending.

JaceC responds:

Check out my (more) elaborate stuff somewhere in my...profile or something, Help me spread this if you can!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Ha! look forward to future animations!

JaceC responds:

Thank you for reviewing! Help me spread this if you can!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It´s ok I but the animation is the best thing!

JaceC responds:

Thank you very much! Help me spread this if you can!