Well ok
Alright so this was a nice little toon you have going on here you really pushed some nice ideas with this one and made things work and made some nice animation here charchter was good you should really think about adding some real voice work into this one because that voice used was just not fitting to everything so some improved voices is my suggestion everything else is really good with this piece here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Use some natrual voices
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