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Eulogy For 'Mary dress up'

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07-20-13 – 07-22-13

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Well to make up for how terrible my MMD crap was, here's a REAL Flash, a dress up game!

OK, so one reason I used MMD in the "Flash" I deleted was because I HATE the way Flash butchers my drawings. When I draw in stuff like MS Paint or Firealpaca it's fine but when I draw in Flash it looks like the pencil and paint tool threw up. Seriously, look at Mary! How terrible does she look in this game? SHE LOOKS HIDEOUS! DX

*sigh* I hope you still enjoy this game.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Actually, she's cute. She's got some issues with proportions, obviously, but you're not going for photorealistic, so she's still cute. :3

The music is nice. Reminds me of Arabella's Music Box, which is in my favorites and has a longer run, so if anyone complains about the music being repetitive, there's an option for you to change it to.

I like the outfits. Nothing to large in the way of options, but they're nice. On the blue one, add a colored piece in the mid area, so that it covers the yellow bra with other options, and either makes it look like a different bra, or use flesh color to make it look like there's no bra. As an added bonus, this will frustrate the people who will review this with, 'why can't I take her clothes off?!?!?' It's a dress up game, after all; not a dress down game. x)

Basic and plain, room for improvement, but off to a good start, and not bad at all. :)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Little confused as to how this game wound up under the movies tab, but anyway >_>
Not much to say really. It's a simple game with a simple purpose. As dressup games go, adding more items and maybe some animation like eye blinking would jazz it up a bit. In regards to your drawing skills, don't beat yourself up too much. There are many many others on here that don't even attempt to put effort into their flash drawings, so you get kudos for actually caring. And you know what they say, practice makes perfect :)


Rated 3 / 5 stars

You should work on the proportions more, and add more options.
Also, try using different music? It didn't seem to fit the game much, and it was silent at the beginning and came out of nowhere. It's rather unsettling, especially if your speakers are up too high.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Don't sweat it. I'm not familiar with how flash works, but it sounds like you need to work more with it instead of other programs. Try asking folks who design similar games for pointers, there are surely plenty of people around here who'd be willing to lend a hand.
As for this project, I can't say much about it. Some alright music that doesn't loop well, and a click and drag dress-up with some paltry options.

Maybe try adding a snap feature that conforms to the character, add more options, and maybe a new design layout with visuals and stuff instead of a plain white background.


Stats, Info & More

1.53 / 5.00