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A young boy meets a monster at the lake.
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Wow, that was really interesting. I mean, I didn't know much of what to make of this. It wasn't as dark as it seemed. It was implied the kid was going through a bad relationship with his brother. Then he goes and just leaves. It's so strange.
I guess the monster was good after all. What's the message? Sometimes we're just better off disappearing? It just seemed too deep. Oh yeah, that makes sense.
That monster look kinda cute in a way.
Pretty emotional for that matter too
so beautiful ;___________;
but the end could be more implicit, that would be beautiful too
Wow. I like how you didn't show what he was looking at, at the end.
It just leaves you to fill in the gaps yourself. :3