im gonna be honest with you, I really could only understand every other word or so you were saying. most of it I couldn't make out and while I did enjoy the animation style and the video overall, not being able to tell what you were saying killed it for me.

I think it was a good video but in the future if you want to record your own voice I suggest either investing in a better microphone or getting someone else to do the voice over work that does have a better microphone.

best of luck.