As a film maker, this had a good cinematic feel to it even though it was drawn in MS Paint. Your drawings of the human characters and weapons remind me of counter-strike. The creek of the door into a dark room lured me in enough and set the the overall tone.
Not bad an amateur work but still decent let it stay
If this was your first or second video it's pretty good for someone just starting out. The audio is awful, and there should be more plot development. Even though it was all drawn in MSP there are some people including myself that will get that nostalgia feeling watching this and thinking back to the old art style of the early sierra games or some of the early pc adventure games like Dare to Dream. Keep trying, you'll get better