Trez-Treize go to Youtube and search up More - by Mark Osborne.
dubstep is overused, cool animation
The visuals matches what I think you were going for. I do think in a story like this the 3d look was the best way to go. The little ball of light was a bit too simple but work overall for what their need to be and do. the visuals on the eye was good. The music was simple but was blissful and chaos that matches the story well and the twist at the middle was a little easy to see but i do not think it was made for that point overall I like this short
at first i was like gaaayyyyy.....but then it got awsome
Very nice animation and the concept reminds me a book called Anthem by Ayn Rand...talks exactly about alienation, although it might refers more to the ''equality'' of communism.
Keep it up with meaningful animations :)