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A Fox Tale (Rough Draft)

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A tale of a fox who's lost something very dear in it's life. As memories create wonderful illusions of love and unity, reality politely reminds this fox that sometimes we are wounded by our own understanding of love.

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That . was Beautiful. :D

A flipnote huh
It's doesn't really belong in newgrounds if you know what i mean
a lot of gore and killing but i licked it a little
good art too

Is beatiful :D
Me gusto mucho tu video

Really sweet. :)
Maybe next time you can try to fixate the camera and/or the book - is it a book? - so that all the pages are in the same location. Also, the lighting could be a little bit better.
The piano piece is nice too. :)

This looks like it could be a good story. However, it's not ready to be submitted yet.

- The art was good. The drawings were nice. The simple format is actually an acceptable way of doing things. That works.

- Animate it. This was too slow to be animation, and it dragged on. It was more like a slideshow, and technically, slideshows aren't allowed on Newgrounds.

-The music was great.

-Keep your hands out of the pictures. Also, try to keep the edges straight. When the pages are moving all over the screen, it's very distracting.

I look forward to seeing the finished version of this. :)

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Uploaded
Jun 14, 2013
11:33 PM EDT