That hoop is unbreakable

Great choreography for the fighting, perhaps you could use more varied sound effects, and increase the framerate for motion during the fighting portions.

You definitely have skill though, and I hope to see more RHG from you.

Fighting with a hula hoop reminds of Mint from Threads of Fate. Good times, and good animation. Some typos on the text is the only problem I had.

It's really good for your first RHG and I am hoping it gets submitted soon.

Not bad. I thought the slow-mo and freeze frames could have been used more effectively.