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I mean.. hello and welcome to my improv music video
worked real hard on it , hope you enjoy the animation
and possibly the music

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I found this to be pretty good. I think it was at least mediocre. I really do appreciate the different styles. Well, it seemed like that was the intention. The animation was pretty good. I did feel like this was a bit too long.

The voice got a bit annoying too. I still appreciate this for its creativity. I wouldn't give it the Daily Feature, though. Well, whatever the people want, I guess. There probably should be more cartoons about birds.

cant resist saying this but the green bird and the bald eagle looked like they were having a retarded seizure(no offence and F*CKING hilarious!)

Tropicana responds:

This is intentional :) thanks

As I interpreted the video as mostly if not purely comedic in purpose, I think this was pretty freaking awesome. It didn't have to have amazing animation, in fact I believe that it was better without it. There were a couple slightly awkward pauses, but hey, I got a laugh, and it looks like most other people did, so who gives a shit. Thanks for your effort, trust that the outcome was enjoyed.

Going to be honest and say that I did not care for the song but I do not really care for this kind of music so I am not going to rate up or down about it. In my opinion you might of wanted to put something like a replay button in the end for people who wish to watch this over again.

-you worked hard on it
-unique song (I think)

-bad audio
-terrible animations
-subtitles did not always match or were not in sync
-art was okay but that is about it

I don't mean to sound harsh but I just want you to try and get better so more people can enjoy your stuff in the future. Please try to get better with the animation since that really helps a lot with the videos and the rating you get. I hope to see more of your videos later and I also hope you get better at this if you truly enjoy doing it, good luck!

Tropicana responds:

Thanks for the crit

Hahaha pretty nice brother!, the song was just awesome

Tropicana responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked the song, You all are motivating me . heres to the next one

Credits & Info

3.86 / 5.00

Jun 2, 2013
3:17 AM EDT
Comedy - Original
  • Daily Feature June 4, 2013