The "I" was broken for me on level 2.
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Playnook presents this simple learning game for children. Place the words in the correct order on the empty places to make the correct sentence. Click and Hold the word and place it in the empty lines before your time ends, once your out of time the game is over.
Fine
It's not Newgrounds worthy though...
I expect that you intended this game to be for a younger audience. I think you did a great job, having a level selector which you can go from. I believe that you could have made the text you drop into it be centered, rather than going to the far left, as it leaves a large gap. The place where the text actually is should be in a nice looking box. Other than that, I love your score system. Really good game for minor players.
There are a number of fixes that should be applied.
The movie clip with "I" doesn't moves for any puzzle that have it (I think 2 or 3 puzzles)
The timer for later levels is very very short for clicking and dragging words, which is made worst when the word doesn't stay place.
The sentences aren't consistent. I'm no where near perfect with sentence structure, but I don't think tea or coffee is required to be in any particular order.
The sound effects are a bit distracting when you move your mouse over it, when you're mentally placing the words in order.
This game has promise and potential, especially for ESL learners and young children, but currently it's a bit buggy and some aspects are distracting.
English isn't my first language, but I guess there are a few mistakes. You can't move the word 'I'. It also shouldn't matter in what order you place some words, for example 'I like tea and coffee' or 'I like coffee and tea.' The same thing with some other sentences, like 'As I came, she was leaving' / 'As she was leaving, I came' / 'As she came, I was leaving' etc.