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Did I make the deadline? I think I made the deadline.

Hey guys, look, ANOTHER NATA entry.

Okay, so originally the idea for this was that she was going to get hit by a car and then the dad would go to the hospital, etc etc. That just seemed waaaay too bland though, so I kept toying around with the idea (For about a month) until I got a different idea; that one is the one in the animation. I figured the girl has some form of chronic disease (maybe Lukemia?) and lost the battle against it. That and thanks to the deadline, I had to cut out some scenes here and there. FEEL FREE TO INTREPRET IT HOW EVER YOU LIKE.

Maybe I should make happy stuff again...

Special thanks to Mattashi for providing the great soundtrack!

*Edit* Holy poopy farts, thanks for the front page Newgrounds!

- Mister Chris


The transitions between the music and heartbeat was not seamless. The fadeout from the music was extremely noticeable and kept breaking the immersion.

I am not glad that I've been watching it. The movie is empty and dull. And, in my humble opinion, playing with sadness of the father that has lost his child is not the best idea. I feel sad and disappointed 3(

that was depresing AND boring.

Go with the happy stuff, maybe that can be good... but honestly that was so dull, I don't really feel the need to check.

The daughter is Half Life 3, The doctor is valve and the father is Gordon Freeman. I actually thought this was sad, it was pretty well made nice animation, audio made you think good job!

[...am i the only one who wanted to write a joke about Gordon Freeman?]

Well, the animation was pretty decent i guess, the sound could have been much better though, so overall, i'd give it a 4/5 on this...

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3.90 / 5.00

May 30, 2013
11:13 PM EDT