My biggest complaint is probably that this felt jumpy, I also felt the voice acting could be improved a bit, and this is a nitpick, but when he's smashing in the glass, it seems to light in impact to even crack it. Over all though, this was pretty well done, using the son, father, and excess characters well.
great and touching storyline.
A story with a moral. I don't see any contaminated lakes, nor many casualties, and the scenery can be rather bland at times, but still, it's a sad story. The atmosphere builds up through the simplest events. Nice work!
ok that was pretty epic.