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Warning... Some parts of the game may be disturbing to you... It may also include flashing lights and mild graphic... Close your eyes or lower the volume if you have a weak heart.
A story about a survivor, who has a dream to be a fisher. Made for the #FishingJam.
Cool atmosphere and art, but the writing definitely needs a lot of work. It just reads too awkwardly
Nice effort though- I definitely get the ideas you were trying to express
Hey, I would like to review this. (SPOILER)
First of all, thank you for adding part of my audio on the project. I really like the concept, it's pretty intense and sad. It made me feel into the story. I have to admit, the little girl, you could have added her side of the story instead of telling it at the end of the game. If there's a sequel, maybe it would make sense. The game play has a matching style with the concept, and the controls worked fine. The fishing matched the concept pretty well, but doing the same thing over and over can be tedious. I love the other audios on this game that people did, it fitted pretty well. You're starting pretty good. :) Keep it up and thanks.
Great graphic style, really interessting.
Lovely concept, but it could use work. The script was very meaningful, but only if you can understand it. It is very distracting to have writing so bad that at some points you cannot even comprehend what your trying to say.
The story was also a bit outlandish, just too much. I think it should have been left more simplistic. Also, the haunting of the little girl comes out of nowhere.
Good story, keep trying!
I'm sorry my friend but it was not very good i'm mean first of all the script was hard to understand the animation were not that good the gaming experience was awful (all what you do is fishing and sleeping) even fishing was not fun and it seems like you tried too much to make the plot sad and effective but it was't that sad really but I appreciate the effort
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