I like the overall idea, but you should really work on the audio. It's hard to understand and kinda vague.
I'm not trying to be negative, just giving some tips. Also you could try to shade the characters more. They look kinda flat now. but the rest was pretty nice, keep at it :)
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Part 2 continue where part 1 left off. Aliens have abducted a killer but what will they do if the killer gets lose?
Spoiler: there will be blood.
See Part 1 here:
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/616390
grimview responds:
Thanks Payn,
I usually keep my speakers low, but I noticed that if I turn up my speakers I get some static on the Doctors voice (scene 2 "why are we moving"). The captain (Scene 1 deep growl voice "There does seam to be a lot of them") is talking to someone that mumbles. These are 2 voices that I'm most comfortable doing. Is it the static that makes them difficult to understand or the accent?
I don't have a budget for voice actors but if you know someone that can do a better voice I open to hearing it. I wanted to start with my own voice & animation to find out what I could do before asking others to help. I'm still in the testing / learning phase so I thank you for insight.
I want to reuse as much as I can to save on animation, like right and left arms are the same graphic, so I don't think I can do shadows, but I'll look into it. May I'll just flip the graphics.