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Sonic Time Travels Pt. 1

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May 22, 2013 | 6:03 PM EDT

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Sonic was just taking a walk when he ran into Eggman. Eggman sends out his new and improved Metal Sonic which is too much for Sonic to handle. When Eggman says he kidnapped Tails, Sonic gets furious, becoming Dark Super-Sonic. With this power he beats up Metal Sonic, but Eggman got away. Then a mysterious enemy appears at the Master Emerald Shrine.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I was pretty impressed, I won't lie. What mostly got my attention was the music, however. If you wrote it, because I know you do write songs, then I am amazed.

Payn responds:

Hahah thanks but I didn't write any of these songs.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

it AWSOME but needs butter aka better graphics bcuz this graphics is BULL SHIT


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I'm not sure if these are canon references, but the story-telling seems a little jagged, somehow. There should be more fluent sound effects, the music should go better with the theme, and if the adventure is going to be in text, it should be a sharper video or larger font.
Try finding similar pieces of work and cop--I mean, take inspiration from, and emulate their styles.

Payn responds:

Yeah, when a new episode is coming out, everything will be much better. Better graphics, better story-telling with less holes in the story, etc. Thanks for sharing your opinion. :)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

I'm going to be honest here it's story isn't bad but could use some improvement. same goes for the quality of the animation. While I do like DBZ sound effects and find them convenient, I feel you rely on them too much for some of the character's actions. try finding a balance and mix them with some other action sounds from street fighter or tekken(or even go as far as to create your own). and don't be afraid to use basic sound effect from the actual game either. Overall, not bad for a first try but it needs some heavy improvement if you want to keep my attention.

Payn responds:

Yeah, in the next episode everything will be much better.
Thanks for the suggestions. :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Sonic would never say "wait up".