I know where you are coming from. Its difficult especially when you are new to flash somewhat.
For a first attempt and 1 months time, Its not bad. Yes, it could use quite a bit of work before its Portal Quality, I think, but I like what you have done in 1 month time.
One thing I see constantly on new flashers is bugs. Bugs bugs bugs bugs bugs. But, after around 20 plays and various diffrent actions on the game, so far it seems pretty solid. I think if you can devote a lot more time to it, you can really start something in flash. Good luck!